This year it is now 2020 and I am a year six. I like being a year six because it helps people and year 5 are going pretty good because know what there doing and sometimes they need help and sometimes they don't. And I really like playing touch and rugby with my friends too. And whenever I see someone sitting down by there self I like letting them join in.
Tuesday, 4 June 2019
This week I did chapter chat what I did was creation station.
I know we had a short week this week, Joseph. However, I still would expect to see more from you. Your drawing is a good start but you could have made it look more finished by tidying up the colouring and going over the lines. Also your writing needs to include more detail, you haven't told us what is happening in this picture.
I know we had a short week this week, Joseph. However, I still would expect to see more from you. Your drawing is a good start but you could have made it look more finished by tidying up the colouring and going over the lines. Also your writing needs to include more detail, you haven't told us what is happening in this picture.
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